Eva Jane Kroes

[Eva Jane Kroes]

BASIC INFORMATION

Name: Eva Jane Kroes

Gender: Female

Wand: 10 inches, ebony with Dragon Heartstring

Blood: Pure Blood

Orientation: Straight

Celebrity Claim: Eva Green

What are you?: A turnip, duh.


APPEARANCE

Hair: Black at usual times, but naturally it’s light brown/red with a spec of yellow highlights. Eva’s hair is fairly long when she wants it to be, but when the frustration seeps to deep, she cuts it short.

Eyes: A grey significant color, turning itself to a light shade of blue when possible. But when she’s mad Eva’s eyes turn a dark liquid black.

Body: She has a lean body, never too skinny and yet never too fat. She keeps thin with her mother’s constant harassing voice in her head, screaming that she’s too fat.

Usual Clothing: Pitch black robes, along with red ones hiding immaculate dresses that fit her perfectly. They are usually in the shades of black or blood red, but on special occasions she’ll put on a little green to hint were she stands.

Distinguishing Features (if any): Other than the scriptures she has tattooed on her back, she expects to receive the ancient dark mark in the near future.


HISTORY

Mother: Guinevere Jane Pvorska, 38, passed away when Eva was four years old.

Father: Lucian Alabaster Kroes, 40, descendent of a the , Lupin Family planned death eater

Siblings: Brother, Ivan Anthony Kroes, 17 || Sister, Katrina Doutzen Kroes,16

Short Biography:Eva was born in the outskirts of Scotland along with her brother, Ivan. Before her mother had died, she would spend every waking moment with her, bustling around the fields that lay around the edges of their house. It was an old Victorian with many flights of stairs, and windows. She’d take care of the numerous gardens they held in the green house with the maids, always causing not much trouble, but enough to get her banished from cookies for the days work. Eva wasn’t a bad child when she was growing up, and yet some may ask questions of why she is how she is now.

Her brother, Ivan, was a very quiet young boy. He was very studious, and still is. Ivan kept busy, studying nature, astronomy, magic. Eva’s sister Katrina, or Kat as she called her, was very boisterous, always full of life at such a young, fragile age. But when their mom died in a tragic accident, everything changed from its happy atmosphere. It grew cold and dark in the mansion; along with they’re father, Lucian. Eva wasn’t very close to him, but as she was the oldest she had to deal with everything, she had to protect her siblings from the cruel monster her father had become. Whether he was always a brutal man or not, the children could never tell. Katrina was Lucian’s favorite child, her being the baby and all.

Eva got jealous at times, but new things were different when she was around. She knew that only her alone knew the secret of her father. After some years after the passing of Guinevere, the children seemed to grow closer and yet different. Ivan grew to learn the secret that his father kept, but he also learned to out grow his shell. Katrina still became the baby everyone cared too much about, to ruin her fairy tale life with dark tales. In the meanwhile, Eva was far more unusual than the rest. She developed a quieter sense, confiding only in herself and her cat.

She learned to keep things to herself, and to follow her father and his wishes. Being all she could to keep Kat away from the dangers of the dark magic she nurtured inside. Ivan did the same, although Lucian wasn’t as cruel with him, he was still hard and rigid, making his son, grow to be nothing like his father. Eva soon started to attend school along with her siblings at Hogwarts. Always keeping the life she had to herself when ever she could.

Personality: Eva is a malicious girl, who tends to be sweet when she wants something, and heartbreaking at the other. She grew up with a father who pushed her to be better, grander than the rest. He was a meticulous man who only guaranteed her the best, while he pushed her into the wrong direction. If her mother had still been alive, Eva might have grown up to be someone different, nicer and lovable. Instead, she’s practically vice, bad tempered, quiet when she needs to be, good mannered to the teachers. . . The list could go on, but we wouldn’t want to display all her faults. Yet, somewhere deep inside she keeps the little girl she once was hidden from the world. With the fairy tales she once believed in tucked neatly away into never ever land, as her father miss treats her use. She’s compassionate at one moment and malicious at the next.

SCHOOL LIFE

School Year: Year 7

Subjects your character takes:

•∞Tranfigurations
•∞potions
•∞DADA
•∞Herbology
•∞Astronomy
•∞Ancient Runes

Favourite Subject(s):

•∞Astronomy
•∞Ancient Runes
•∞DADA

Preferred House and why: Slytherin|| One, Her family hails from this house. Two, the dark nature of the giant snake sparks an interest to her mind. Three, because her father demands it, nothing is greater than the Slytherin House. . .


SAMPLE ROLEPLAY

The night was quiet, placid almost as the sun laid its final rays to rest beyond the horizon. Explicit chills spread themselves up and down her body, making there way up her toes, through her arms and finally, to her neck. Electricity ran through her, as it did every night with the moon up high, bright and shining with delight at the casualness of its surroundings. Her arms crossed themselves gently against her pale chest, keeping her from freezing in the slightest of ways. But she new better than to do so, for if she kept herself from the shivering cold, her fathers scolding words would reappear in her mind.

“To show fear you are letting your guard down. Toughen up! Do you think the dark lord would have accepted fear in his covenant?! No one wants a frightened girl as there companion. Look at your hair, how dirty it is! Clean up! Wash up! Not a single boy would want to marry that . . . look at your face! Straighten your back EVA! It’s the cellar for you tonight, no food for your elicit behavior! GO”.His barking tone seemed to keep itself stored in the back of her mind, always there to correct her if she fell out of place. With her memories the night seemed to close itself in them, keeping itself hushed from all sounds. The skirt of her dress fluttered with the movement of a smooth breeze, causing her black cloak to quiver in response. Eva looked up with the retort of a howl in the distance, making her skin prickle in delight as the creatures of the night flung themselves out. She stood watching over a cliff as the waters of a lake were illuminated brightly by the full moon, the water in it self rippling with the coarse feel of the strong winds. Things were changing; she could feel it in the tips of her blackened soul, making it harder to breathe for a short amount of seconds as her mind composed itself.

Eva smiled despite herself, blood red lips curling in malevolence at the feel of the change, the night. The darkness. Her fingers recoiled lightly around her wand, fingers tracing the outlines of swirls and runes dressed against the stick that held her magic in within. Soon enough things would change, and the placid world she lived in now wouldn’t be the same. The simple muggle born’s would be no more with the arising darkness. With the rustle of leaves, Eva turned swiftly to her right, watching what lay deep inside the forest that guarded Hogwarts. The smile lifted itself from her gentle lips, and she was blank for a moments notice before making her way back up to the castle, to her room. Another night had passed for things to commence, and yet the night was still young for witches like Eva who awaited to receive the gift. . .

[Alex Falconer]

Okay I'm guessing that this isn't quite finished. But as you haven't stated that it isn't I'm going to comment.

Firstly you need to fill in the ones that you haven't already (obviously) Lol.

There's a few things that need to be changed.

1. You father can't be a descendant of the Black family. Sirius was the last of the Blacks- The only person of the Black family left was Bellatrix and she gets killed... (doesn't she?- well even if she didn't she's not gonna be doing much from inside Azkaban- she's definitely dead now though). Which leads to Tonks Bellatrix's niece or Narcissa Bellatrix's sister. Both of these would mean that she's a descendant of the Lupin family or the Malfoy family. There's really no way of you being a descendant of the Blacks. Sorry.

2. You've said that she's in year 8. There are only 7 years at Hogwarts.

3.

Jun 3, 2008 1:12:06 GMT Eva Jane Kroes said:

Wand: 10 inches, ebony with essence of phoenix talon and basilisk fang.

I'm not sure that this is a correct core for a wand. Try one of these: Phoenix Feather, Unicorn Hair, Dragon Heartstring, Veela Hair or something substantial for the centre of your wand rather than the "essence" of something. Also basilisks are incredibly rare and deadly- it's unlikely any wand maker would get near one long enough to get it's "essence".

Once these have been editted just post a message here letting us know. ^^

::Gemstone::

[Eva Jane Kroes]

---Fixed---
Sorry about the mistakes, first time roleplaying on an hp site.
But im sure i'll improve, sorry again. Hope i didnt cause you too much trouble.

[Alex Falconer]

Lol. No worries. You still haven't filled in the other bits that you missed before. I assumed that you hadn't finished and were going to do them-

Short Biography:

Subjects your character takes:

Favourite Subjects:

Fill them in and you're good to go! Post here when you have and providing that there's nothing else wrong I'll (or Sarah'll) except you!

And don't worry! You sound like a good roleplayer even if you haven't done an hp one before ;-) You read the books and/or seen the films?

::Gemstone::

[Eva Jane Kroes]

Thanks, i've been roleplaying for a while on twilight sites. . .
Yeah, i've read the books and seen the movies.
I actually started watching the movies, then reading
the book's to see the comparison. Theyre so totally
different, though!

-Modifyed-

[Alex Falconer]

Cool that's brilliant! I'll accept this character now...

I read the books before the films ever came out- I had just finished book 3 when the first film came out! I didn't even recognise that the film was the book until I saw an advert for it. Lol. You're right they're very different.

This character has been sorted into Slytherin House.